YOU SAID:
Yours was the face I saw when murder entered my heart
INTO JAPANESE
殺人が私の心に入ったときに見たあなたの顔だった
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It was your face I saw when murder entered my mind
INTO JAPANESE
殺人が頭に浮かんだ時に見たのは君の顔だった
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It was your face that I saw when murder came to mind
INTO JAPANESE
殺人が頭に浮かんだ時に見たのは君の顔だった
BACK INTO ENGLISH
It was your face that I saw when murder came to mind
That didn't even make that much sense in English.