YOU SAID:

Your translation is broken, and is badly in need of improvements.

INTO JAPANESE

あなたの翻訳が壊れている、と改善の必要性にひどくです。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It is broken your translation, and is badly in need of improvement.

INTO JAPANESE

それはあなたの翻訳を壊れた、改善の必要がひどくなっています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It broke your translation, the need for improvement has become badly.

INTO JAPANESE

それはあなたの翻訳を破った、改善の必要がひどくなってきています。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

It broke your translation, the need for improvement is becoming badly.

INTO JAPANESE

これは、改善の必要がひどくなってきている、あなたの翻訳を破りました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This is a need for improvement has become badly, broke your translation.

INTO JAPANESE

これは、改善の必要がひどくなってきているが、あなたの翻訳を破りました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This is a need for improvement has become badly, broke your translation.