YOU SAID:

you fit into me like a hook into an eye a fish hook an open eye

INTO JAPANESE

あなたは目にフックのように私にはまります

BACK INTO ENGLISH

You stick to me like a hook in your eyes

INTO JAPANESE

あなたはあなたの目にフックのように私に固執する

BACK INTO ENGLISH

You stick to me like a hook in your eyes