YOU SAID:
Will you update your nickname with the server you are representing please.
INTO JAPANESE
あなたが代表しているサーバーであなたのニックネームを更新してくれませんか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Will you update your nickname on the server you represent?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたが代表するサーバーであなたのニックネームを更新しますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to update your nickname on the server you represent?
INTO JAPANESE
あなたが代表するサーバーであなたのニックネームを更新しますか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to update your nickname on the server you represent?
That didn't even make that much sense in English.