YOU SAID:
will you bring me some chips today when i come to school
INTO JAPANESE
今日学校に来るとき、チップを持ってきてくれる
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When you come to school today, will you bring me a tip?
INTO JAPANESE
今日学校に来たら、チップを持ってきてくれないか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If you come to school today, will you bring me a tip?
INTO JAPANESE
今日学校に来たら、チップを持ってきてくれないか。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If you come to school today, will you bring me a tip?
Come on, you can do better than that.