YOU SAID:
why don't you hop in my car for some candy?
INTO JAPANESE
私の車に乗ってキャンディーを食べませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to ride in my car and eat some candy?
INTO JAPANESE
私の車に乗って、お菓子を食べませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to ride in my car and eat sweets?
INTO JAPANESE
私の車に乗ってスイーツ食べませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to ride in my car and eat some sweets?
INTO JAPANESE
私の車に乗って、お菓子を食べませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to ride in my car and eat sweets?
INTO JAPANESE
私の車に乗ってスイーツ食べませんか?
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Would you like to ride in my car and eat some sweets?
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