YOU SAID:
while the enemies of the emperor still draw breath there shall be no peace
INTO JAPANESE
皇帝の敵がまだ息を引き取っている間、平和はないだろう
BACK INTO ENGLISH
There will be no peace while the emperor's enemies are still dying
INTO JAPANESE
皇帝の敵がまだ死んでいる間、平和はありません
BACK INTO ENGLISH
No peace while the emperor's enemies are still dead
INTO JAPANESE
皇帝の敵がまだ死んでいる間は平和ではない
BACK INTO ENGLISH
No peace while the emperor's enemies are still dead
That didn't even make that much sense in English.