YOU SAID:
While collecting the stars, I connected the dots
INTO JAPANESE
星を集めている間、私は点を結んだ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
While collecting stars I tied up dots
INTO JAPANESE
星を集めている間に私は点を結んだ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I drew a spot while collecting stars.
INTO JAPANESE
私は星を集めながらスポットを描きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
I drew a spot while collecting stars.
Come on, you can do better than that.