YOU SAID:
When they had done this, they caught a great number of fish and their nets were tearing. They signaled to their partners in the other boat to come to help them
INTO JAPANESE
彼らがこれをしたとき、彼らはたくさんの魚を捕まえました、そして、彼らの網は引き裂かれていました。彼らは彼らを助けるために来るために他のボートで彼らのパートナーに合図しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they did this, they caught a lot of fish, and their net was torn apart. They signaled their partners with other boats to come to help them
INTO JAPANESE
彼らがこれをしたとき、彼らはたくさんの魚を釣った、そして彼らの網は引き裂かれた。彼らは彼らを助けるために来るために他のボートと彼らのパートナーに合図しました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they did this, they caught a lot of fish, and their net was torn. They signaled other boats and their partners to come to help them
INTO JAPANESE
彼らがこれをしたとき、彼らはたくさんの魚を釣った、そして彼らの網は引き裂かれた。彼らは他の艇とそのパートナーたちに彼らを助けるために来るように合図した
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they did this, they caught a lot of fish, and their net was torn. They signaled other boats and their partners to come to help them
Come on, you can do better than that.