YOU SAID:
When they enter the inn the others arrive. Lillie: “I guess we should go inside.”(they walk into the inn) The scene shifts to the inside of the inn.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らが宿に入ると、他の人が到着します。リリー:「私たちは中に入る必要があると思います。」(彼らは宿に入る)シーンは宿の中に移ります。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they enter the inn, others arrive. Lily: "I think we need to go inside." (They go into the inn) The scene moves into the inn.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らが旅館に入ると、他の人が到着します。リリー:「私たちは中に入る必要があると思います。」 (旅館に入る)シーンは旅館に移ります。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they enter the inn, others arrive. Lily: "I think we need to go inside." (Entering the inn) The scene moves to the inn.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らが旅館に入ると、他の人が到着します。リリー:「私たちは中に入る必要があると思います。」 (旅館に入る)シーンは旅館に移動します。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When they enter the inn, others arrive. Lily: "I think we need to go inside." (Entering the inn) The scene moves to the inn.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.