YOU SAID:
When the pleasure is a dream on a secret love,
INTO JAPANESE
秘密の恋の喜びが夢であるとき、
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When the joys of secret love are but a dream,
INTO JAPANESE
秘密の愛の喜びが夢に過ぎないとき、
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When the joys of secret love are but a dream,
That didn't even make that much sense in English.