YOU SAID:
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter they all became surprised to discover that it was very cold and not much to see because of all the snow covering everything.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人々が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪で覆われているため非常に寒く、見ることがあまりないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and it was very cold and not much to see.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人々が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪で覆われていて、とても寒くて見ることがあまりないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and it was so cold that I didn't see much.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪で覆われ、寒くてあまり見えないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and it was cold and not very visible.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人々が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪で覆われていて寒くてあまり見えないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
In winter, when some people from the east came to see my city, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and cold and invisible.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人々が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪と寒さで覆われ目に見えないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and cold and invisible.
INTO JAPANESE
冬に東から何人かの人々が私の街を見に来たとき、彼らはすべてが雪で覆われ、寒くて見えないことを知って驚いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When some people from the east came to see my city in the winter, they were surprised to learn that everything was covered with snow and cold and invisible.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.