YOU SAID:
When she decided to head out, she first packed the dog's red leash, then her red shoes.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女が出発することに決めたとき、彼女はまず犬の赤い紐を詰め、それから赤い靴を履いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When she decided to leave, she first stuffed the dog's red string and then wore red shoes.
INTO JAPANESE
彼女が去ろうと決めたとき、まず犬の赤い紐を詰め、その後赤い靴を履いた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When she decided to leave, she first stuffed the dog's red string and then wore red shoes.
Come on, you can do better than that.