YOU SAID:

when i was hungry, i would say to my grandparents: May i please have bread?

INTO JAPANESE

お腹が空いたとき、祖父母にこう言います。パンを頂けますか？

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I'm hungry, I tell my grandparents: Can you give me some bread?

INTO JAPANESE

お腹が空いたとき、祖父母に「パンをくれませんか？」と言います。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I'm hungry, I say to my grandparents, "Can you give me some bread?"

INTO JAPANESE

お腹が空いたら祖父母に「パンをくれませんか？」と言います。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When I'm hungry, I say to my grandparents, "Can you give me some bread?"