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when i was a young boy, my father, took me into the city to see a marching band

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私が少年の頃、父がマーチングバンドを見に私を連れて行ってくれました

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When I was a boy, my father took me to a marching band

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私が男の子だったとき、私の父は私をマーチングバンドに連れて行ってくれました

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My father took me to a marching band when I was a boy

INTO JAPANESE

私が男の子だったとき、私の父は私をマーチングバンドに連れて行った

BACK INTO ENGLISH

My father took me to a marching band when I was a boy