YOU SAID:
When I saw the Amazon guy out there yesterday, I told him about the package he misdelivered.
INTO JAPANESE
昨日、アマゾンの男を見たとき、私は彼が誤って配達した荷物について彼に話しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Yesterday, when I saw the guy on Amazon, I told him about a package he had accidentally delivered.
INTO JAPANESE
昨日、アマゾンでその男を見たとき、私は彼が誤って配達した荷物について話しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Yesterday, when I saw the guy on Amazon, I told him about a package he had accidentally delivered.
Come on, you can do better than that.