YOU SAID:
When I look at you I see the story in your eyes When we're dancing The night begins to shine
INTO JAPANESE
私があなたを見たとき 私はあなたの目に物語を見る 私たちが踊っているとき 夜が輝き始める
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I see you I see the story in your eyes The night begins to shine when we are dancing
INTO JAPANESE
私があなたを見るとき私はあなたの目に物語を見る私たちが踊っているとき夜は輝き始めます
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I see you I see the story in your eyes The night begins to shine when we are dancing
That didn't even make that much sense in English.