YOU SAID:
When half way through the journey of our life I found that I was in a gloomy wood, because the path which led aright was lost.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちの人生の旅の途中で 私は暗い森の中にいることに気づきました、 正しく導いた道が失われたからです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
During the journey of our lives, I noticed that I was in a dark forest, Because the path that led correctly was lost.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちの人生の旅の間に、私は暗い森の中にいることに気づきました、 正しく導いた道が失われたからです。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
During the journey of our lives, I noticed that I was in a dark forest, Because the path that led correctly was lost.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.