YOU SAID:
髪を掴み上げられ顔をしかめたが、綾は拷問官から視線を鋭く、逸らさない。
INTO JAPANESE
髪を掴み上げられ顔をしかめたが、綾は拷問官から視線を鋭く、逸らさない。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her hair was grabbed and she frowned, but Aya's gaze was sharp and she didn't turn away from the torture officer.
INTO JAPANESE
髪を掴まれ眉をひそめたが、綾の視線は鋭く、拷問官から目を背けなかった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her hair was grabbed and her eyebrows frowned, but Aya's gaze was sharp and she didn't turn away from the torture officer.
INTO JAPANESE
髪を掴まれて眉を顰めるが、綾の視線は鋭く、拷問官から目を背けることはなかった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Her hair was grabbed and her eyebrows frowned, but Aya's gaze was sharp and she didn't turn away from the torture officer.
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