YOU SAID:
彼女はそれを読み終えると
INTO JAPANESE
彼女はそれを読み終えると
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When she finished reading it
INTO JAPANESE
彼女がそれを読み終えたら
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When she finishes reading it
INTO JAPANESE
彼女がそれを読み終えたら
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When she finishes reading it
Come on, you can do better than that.