YOU SAID:
"What??" she said, her hair exploding.
INTO JAPANESE
"何??"彼女は言った、彼女の髪は爆発しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"What?" She said, her hair exploded.
INTO JAPANESE
"何?"彼女は言った、彼女の髪は爆発しました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"What?" She said, her hair exploded.
Come on, you can do better than that.