YOU SAID:
we went to her house, then to his house, then to my house.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちは彼女の家に行き、それから彼の家に行き、それから私の家に行きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
We went to her house, then to his house, and then to my house.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちは彼女の家に行き、それから彼の家に行き、それから私の家に行きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
We went to her house, then to his house, and then to my house.
Come on, you can do better than that.