YOU SAID:
We saw her once last fall. Our grandpa died in a hospital gown. She didn't seem to care. She smoked in her room and colored her hair. I was ashamed of her.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちは去年の秋に一度彼女に会った。私たちのおじいちゃんは病院のガウンで死んだ。彼女は気にしていないようだった。彼女は部屋でタバコを吸い、髪に色を塗った。私は彼女を恥じていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
We met her once last fall. Our grandpa died in a hospital gown. She didn't seem to care. She smoked in her room and colored her hair. I was ashamed of her.
INTO JAPANESE
私たちは去年の秋に一度彼女に会った。私たちのおじいちゃんは病院のガウンで死んだ。彼女は気にしていないようだった。彼女は部屋でタバコを吸い、髪に色を塗った。私は彼女を恥じていた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
We met her once last fall. Our grandpa died in a hospital gown. She didn't seem to care. She smoked in her room and colored her hair. I was ashamed of her.
Come on, you can do better than that.