YOU SAID:
Watching eyes glowing red, find teeth glistening, thick and coated in blood
INTO JAPANESE
目が赤く光るのを見ていると、歯がきらきらと輝いていて、血に覆われて厚くなっています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I see my eyes glowing red, my teeth are shining and thickened with blood.
INTO JAPANESE
私の目が赤く光っているのを見ると、私の歯は輝いていて血で厚くなっています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When I see my eyes glowing red, my teeth are shining and thickened with blood.
Come on, you can do better than that.