YOU SAID:
"Want a cup of tea?" she said.
INTO JAPANESE
「お茶を飲みたいですか?」彼女は言いました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Do you want to have a cup of tea?" She said.
INTO JAPANESE
「お茶を飲みたいですか?」彼女は言いました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
"Do you want to have a cup of tea?" She said.
Come on, you can do better than that.