YOU SAID:
Twelve horses waltzed up to the water, yet only four would drink, a peculiar thing indeed.
INTO JAPANESE
12 頭の馬が水に向かってワルツを踊ったが、水を飲むのは 4 頭だけだった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Twelve horses waltzed to the water, but only four drank.
INTO JAPANESE
12 頭の馬が水に向かってワルツを踊りましたが、水を飲んだのは 4 頭だけでした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Twelve horses waltzed to the water, but only four drank.
Come on, you can do better than that.