YOU SAID:
train came roiling down the track
INTO JAPANESE
列車が列車を下って来た
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The train came down the train
INTO JAPANESE
電車が電車に降りた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The train got off the train.
INTO JAPANESE
列車は列車から降りました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The train got off the train.
Come on, you can do better than that.