YOU SAID:
tonight will be the night that i fall for you
INTO JAPANESE
今夜は私があなたに恋する夜になるでしょう
BACK INTO ENGLISH
tonight will be the night i fall in love with you
INTO JAPANESE
今夜は私があなたと恋に落ちる夜になるでしょう
BACK INTO ENGLISH
tonight will be the night i fall in love with you
Come on, you can do better than that.