YOU SAID:
Three birds went on a trip. They went to mcdonald's and ate burgers because the ice cream machine was broken. Afterwards, they went shopping at the local mall where they also went to the cinema. The movie was boring, so they went back home.
INTO JAPANESE
三羽の鳥が旅行に行った。アイスクリームマシンが壊れていたので、彼らはマクドナルドに行き、ハンバーガーを食べました。その後、彼らは地元のモールで買い物に行き、そこで映画館にも行きました。映画は退屈だったので、彼らは家に帰った。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Three birds went on a trip. The ice cream machine was broken, so they went to McDonald's and ate hamburgers. Then they went shopping at the local mall, where they also went to the cinema. The movie was boring, so they went home.
INTO JAPANESE
三羽の鳥が旅行に行った。アイスクリームの機械が壊れていたので、彼らはマクドナルドに行き、ハンバーガーを食べました。その後、彼らは地元のモールで買い物に行き、そこで映画館にも行きました。映画は退屈だったので、彼らは家に帰った。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Three birds went on a trip. The ice cream machine was broken, so they went to McDonald's and ate hamburgers. Then they went shopping at the local mall, where they also went to the cinema. The movie was boring, so they went home.
Come on, you can do better than that.