YOU SAID:
this enraged his father who punished him severly
INTO JAPANESE
これは彼を厳しく罰した父親を激怒させた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This enraged his father who severely punished him
INTO JAPANESE
これは彼を厳しく罰した父親を激怒させた
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This enraged his father who severely punished him
Come on, you can do better than that.