YOU SAID:
this ends when i grant them my forgiveness, not the other way around
INTO JAPANESE
これは私が彼らに私の許しを与えたときに終わります。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This is over when I gave them my permission.
INTO JAPANESE
私は彼らに私の許可を与えたときこれは終わった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
This is over when I gave them my permission.
You should move to Japan!