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This could be much better if it was used as a song

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これは歌として使用された場合、はるかに良いかもしれません

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This may be much better if used as a song

INTO JAPANESE

歌として使用する場合、これははるかに良いかもしれません

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This may be much better when used as a song

INTO JAPANESE

これは歌として使用する場合、はるかに良いかもしれません

BACK INTO ENGLISH

This may be much better when used as a song