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this chick checked me out and she was older but she said her friend thought i was pretty but it was a hallucination

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このひよこは私をチェックアウトし、彼女は年上でしたが、彼女の友人は私がかわいいと思ったと言いましたが、それは幻覚でした

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This chick checked me out and she was older, but her friend said I thought I was cute, but it was a hallucination

INTO JAPANESE

このひよこは私をチェックアウトし、彼女は年上でした、しかし彼女の友人は私がかわいいと思ったと言いました、しかしそれは幻覚でした

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This chick checked me out and she was older, but her friend said I thought I was cute, but it was a hallucination