YOU SAID:
They were whispering excitedly together.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは一緒に興奮してささやきました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They whispered together in excitement.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは興奮して一緒にささやきました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They excitedly whispered together.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは興奮して一緒にささやきました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They excitedly whispered together.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.