YOU SAID:
they need not always try to maximize their own happiness in action whenever possible.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは、可能な限り、行動の中で自分の幸せを最大化しようとする必要はありません。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They do not have to try to maximize their happiness in their actions as much as possible.
INTO JAPANESE
彼らは彼らの行動において彼らの幸せを可能な限り最大化しようとする必要はありません。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
They do not have to try to maximize their happiness in their actions as much as possible.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.