YOU SAID:
There's someone standing in the hall, near the door to the room where I stay.
INTO JAPANESE
私が泊まっている部屋のドアの近くのホールに誰かが立っています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Someone is standing in the hall near the door of the room I'm staying in.
INTO JAPANESE
私が泊まっている部屋のドア近くのホールに誰かが立っています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Someone is standing in the hall near the door of the room I'm staying in.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.