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YOU SAID:

There are too many things wrong with this series, but to keep it short, I'll go with the main problems: - Paint -Random things come out of nowhere that supposedly "contribute" to the plot (Shrek, the pixies, /Blocky&Flower's children, etc.) -Too many scenes with those cutaway anime pics with exposition (SHOW DON'T TELL) -Spelling errors (Is it seriously that hard to go back and rewrite what you spelled wrong?!)

INTO JAPANESE

間違っているこのシリーズは、あまりにも多くのものがありますがそれを短くに主要な問題と一緒に行きます:-ペイント - ランダムなものがプロット (シュレック、ピクシーズ、/Blocky ・花の子供、等) に「貢献」ではおそらくどこから出てくる-博覧会でそれらの断面図アニメの写真とあまりにも多くのシーン (ショーを教えていない) - スペルミス (それは真剣に戻って、あなたが間違って綴られる書き換え難しいことか?)

Party is busted

it is unlikely that this phrase will ever reach equilibrium

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