YOU SAID:
Then evening comes: they fade and twinkle out; the torches pass on into another chamber and another dream.
INTO JAPANESE
そして夕方が来る。彼らは色あせて輝き、たいまつは別の部屋と別の夢の中にとどまる。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
And then comes the evening. They fade and shine, and the torch stays in another room and another dream.
INTO JAPANESE
そして夕方が来る。彼らは色あせて輝き、聖火は別の部屋と別の夢に残ります。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
And then comes the evening. They fade and shine, and the torch stays in another room and another dream.
Come on, you can do better than that.