YOU SAID:
The Sun saw the Moon and cried as she melted
INTO JAPANESE
太陽は月を見て、彼女が溶けると泣きました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun saw the moon and cried when she melted
INTO JAPANESE
太陽は月を見て、彼女が溶けると泣きました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun saw the moon and cried when she melted
That didn't even make that much sense in English.