YOU SAID:
The story would sound rather different, if I had written it.
INTO JAPANESE
私がそれを書いていたら、物語はかなり違うように聞こえるでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I were writing it, the story would sound quite different.
INTO JAPANESE
私がそれを書いているならば、物語は全く違ったように聞こえるでしょう。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I am writing it, the story sounds quite different.
INTO JAPANESE
私がそれを書いているならば、物語はかなり違って聞こえます。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
If I am writing it, the story sounds quite different.
You should move to Japan!