YOU SAID:
The rat dawns at dawn to till till his fields are filled.
INTO JAPANESE
ネズミは夜明けに彼の畑が満たされるまで夜明け。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The mouse dawned until his field was filled at dawn.
INTO JAPANESE
ネズミは夜明けに彼の畑が満たされるまで夜明けした。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The mouse dawned until his field was filled at dawn.
Come on, you can do better than that.