YOU SAID:

The rain came pouring down, when I was drowning that's when I could finally breathe.

INTO JAPANESE

雨が土砂降りになって、溺れそうになったとき、やっと息ができた。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When the rain started pouring down and I felt like I was drowning, I could finally breathe.

INTO JAPANESE

雨が降り始めて溺れそうになったとき、ようやく息ができました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When it started raining and I almost drowned, I finally could breathe.

INTO JAPANESE

雨が降り始めて溺れそうになったとき、ようやく息ができました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

When it started raining and I almost drowned, I finally could breathe.