YOU SAID:
The rain came pouring down, when I was drowning that's when I could finally breathe.
INTO JAPANESE
雨が土砂降りになって、溺れそうになったとき、やっと息ができた。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When the rain started pouring down and I felt like I was drowning, I could finally breathe.
INTO JAPANESE
雨が降り始めて溺れそうになったとき、ようやく息ができました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When it started raining and I almost drowned, I finally could breathe.
INTO JAPANESE
雨が降り始めて溺れそうになったとき、ようやく息ができました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
When it started raining and I almost drowned, I finally could breathe.
You should move to Japan!