YOU SAID:
the people across the street from me have 5 cars, 2 of which are broken, and they all make lots of noise.
INTO JAPANESE
通りの向こうの人は私から5台の車があり、うち2台は壊れていて、彼らはすべて騒音が多い。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
People beyond the street have five cars from me, two of them are broken, they all have noises.
INTO JAPANESE
通りの向こうの人は私から5台の車を持っていて、そのうちの2台が壊れている、彼らはすべて騒音を持っている。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
People beyond the street have five cars from me, two of them are broken, they all have noises.
Come on, you can do better than that.