YOU SAID:
The kisses of the sun were sweet; I didn't blink.
INTO JAPANESE
太陽のキスは甘かった。私はまばたきしなかった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun kiss was sweet. I did not blink.
INTO JAPANESE
太陽のキスは甘かった。私はまばたきしなかった。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The sun kiss was sweet. I did not blink.
Come on, you can do better than that.