YOU SAID:
The human whose name is written in the note shall die
INTO JAPANESE
ノートに名前を書かれた人間は死ぬ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Human being written a name on a note dies
INTO JAPANESE
ノートに名前を書かれた人間は死ぬ
BACK INTO ENGLISH
Human being written a name on a note dies
That didn't even make that much sense in English.