YOU SAID:
The heartbeat of the older brother is weak and abnormal.
INTO JAPANESE
兄の心拍は弱く、異常です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My brother's heartbeat is weak and abnormal.
INTO JAPANESE
弟の心拍は弱くて異常です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My brother's heart rate is weak and abnormal.
INTO JAPANESE
兄の心拍数は弱く、異常です。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
My brother's heart rate is weak and abnormal.
Come on, you can do better than that.