YOU SAID:
the girl went to Greg and told him she loved him and wanted to spend every last minute with him
INTO JAPANESE
女の子はグレッグに行って、彼女は彼を愛し、彼と最後の最後の最後を過ごしたいと彼に言った
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The girl went to Greg and she told him she loved him and wanted to spend the last minute with him
INTO JAPANESE
女の子はグレッグに行き、彼女は彼を愛していて、最後の最後を彼と過ごしたいと彼に言いました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The girl went to Greg and she told him she loved him and wanted to spend the last minute with him
That didn't even make that much sense in English.