YOU SAID:
the geese have risen from the dark abyss, acompanied by thick, red fog.
INTO JAPANESE
ガチョウは濃い赤い霧に伴って暗い淵から上昇しています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The goose is rising from the dark edge with a dense red mist.
INTO JAPANESE
ガチョウは濃い赤い霧で暗い縁から上昇しています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The goose is a dark red fog rising from the dark rim.
INTO JAPANESE
ガチョウは濃い赤色の霧で、暗い縁から上がっています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The goose is a dark red mist, rising from the dark rim.
INTO JAPANESE
ガチョウは濃い赤色の霧で、暗い縁から上がっています。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The goose is a dark red mist, rising from the dark rim.
That didn't even make that much sense in English.