YOU SAID:

the flame alight within my inner being, startling as the sun caving in on the sky

INTO JAPANESE

私の内なる存在の中で炎が灯り、太陽が空に沈むように驚いた

BACK INTO ENGLISH

A fire lit within my inner being and I was astonished as the sun set in the sky.

INTO JAPANESE

私の内に火が灯り、空に夕日が沈むのを見て私は驚きました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

A fire was lit within me and I watched in amazement as the sun set in the sky.

INTO JAPANESE

私の中で火が灯り、空に沈む夕日を驚きながら眺めました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

A fire lit inside of me and I watched in amazement as the sun set in the sky.

INTO JAPANESE

私の中で火が灯り、空に沈む夕日を驚いて見ていました。

BACK INTO ENGLISH

A fire lit inside of me and I watched in amazement as the sun set in the sky.