YOU SAID:
the brid was siting in the flowder bed and i wnet up to it
INTO JAPANESE
花嫁は花壇に座っていて、私はそこまで行きました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The bride was sitting in the flowerbed and I went over there
INTO JAPANESE
花嫁は花壇に座っていた、そして私はそこへ行った
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The bride was sitting in a flower bed and I went there
INTO JAPANESE
花嫁が花壇に座っていたので、そこへ行きました
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The bride was sitting in the flowerbed, so I went there.
INTO JAPANESE
花嫁が花壇に座っていたので、そこに行きました。
BACK INTO ENGLISH
The bride was sitting in the flowerbed, so I went there.
Come on, you can do better than that.